100 Words: Darkness
Sunday, February 7, 2010 at 02:56PM It's been AGES since I've participated in the 100 Word Challenge over at Velvet Verbosity. Actually, it's been a while since I've taken the time to write much fiction at all - including a novel I started last year. Oy.
Anyhow. This week's challenge: Darkness. I've dusted off my writing brain to give it a shot.
Here it goes:
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I awoke gasping for air. My eyes were slow to adjust to the darkness of my bedroom.
Clarity set in. It was the middle of the night. I had been dreaming. Of him. Again. He was right there. It was as if the past few months had never happened. As if I was in a world where he hadn’t died.
Each blink made the lingering image of him on the inside of my eyelids disappear a little more.
I couldn’t let him go completely. I shut my eyes tightly and tried to force myself back to sleep. Back to him.
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Reader Comments (1)
Nicely done. You've said so much in so few words.